I'm reacting to what Gabriella made note of during the last class, that we have too much copy, and lack of compelling imagery.
This is a work in progress…(duh), preliminary, but more changes tonight…
Thinking of a side bar or service material on the side--but not a helpy/advicey sort of thing that GQ and Men's Health would add? I'd like to think my readers are more in the know?
Thinking of a side bar or service material on the side--but not a helpy/advicey sort of thing that GQ and Men's Health would add? I'd like to think my readers are more in the know?
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try a clipping path around your round red glasses frames and run the text around it. It's hard, but worth it if you can do it well
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