1 circle is weird...esp when your headline says perfect CIRCLES—implying more than one
other than that one image that you've placed awkwardly in a circle, there's nothing really circle about your spread... it looks extremely boxy. with boxes of type and images all around.
maybe experiment with scale change... get some bigger images of the glasses in there, put em big at an angle bleeding off the page. just a suggestion. or blow up the bw image of those two funny dudes in the glasses, that image is pretty strong.
lotsa slab serif... i like slab serif too, but maybe this is overkill
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1 circle is weird...esp when your headline says perfect CIRCLES—implying more than one
other than that one image that you've placed awkwardly in a circle, there's nothing really circle about your spread... it looks extremely boxy. with boxes of type and images all around.
maybe experiment with scale change... get some bigger images of the glasses in there, put em big at an angle bleeding off the page. just a suggestion. or blow up the bw image of those two funny dudes in the glasses, that image is pretty strong.
lotsa slab serif... i like slab serif too, but maybe this is overkill
i'm trying it out…i told gen it was like getting away with murder, but she said it might look alright (re: slab serif overkill)
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